
“She couldn’t hear anything above the pounding of her heart. Curled up under the table, she gulped in fear at the large shadow on the wall!”
Mary Alice read with bated breath. Mystery books were one of her favorite things. Her children thought she was too old to be reading mysteries, but what did they know.
They also thought she should learn how to knit. Why? Why stay home and knit when she could be out line dancing, listening to Willie Nelson and Tanya Tucker.
“Her hands covered her face, pressed hard against her mouth to keep her from screaming. “
Pausing for a moment from reading, Mary Alice took a sip of her special homemade tea.
Then she grabbed her notebook from her nightstand and added Dates to her grocery list, before she forgot. Now back to her book.
“The shadow slinked along the wall. To her horror it was coming her way.”
Ring Ring! Mary Alice picked up the phone, but no one was there.
“Pinching her eyes shut, she waited for the inevitable to happen. She had nowhere to run. Surely he would spot her. He rounded the corner and bent down, piercing her with his cold, blue eyes….”
Mary Alice’s hands were sweaty and her pulse racing. Ding Dong!
Horace was here. She took a couple of deep breaths to calm herself.
Time for a change of pace. She had lost track of time while reading. Digging into her purse she found her cherry lipstick and ran it across her lips. Then she slipped on her dancing shoes and opened the door.
“Hi Horace! I am all ready, lets go have some fun.”
Horace put out his arm, “I am all yours, my fair lady.”
They got into his Mustang. Driving into the sunset, while Rod Stewart sang “Forever Young” on the radio.
I love that song. And I like how you had the two stories going together
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It ia a great song. 🙂
Thanks for reading, glad you liked it.
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Thank you for writing it!
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You are always welcome, its fun to do.
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I love it! Who says we oldsters have to give up reading mysteries and sit around knitting, anyway? I knitted when I was younger, but I gave it up and gave all my yarn and supplies to my daughter, who now knits every evening! But … how did you find a picture of me on Pinterest??? 🤣
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I couldn’t knit if I had too. I would succeed at getting the yarn all tangled! I can’t dance either, but I can read! 😄
Haha! SSH! I was trying to protect your identity, but I guess you blown it now.
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HAH!!! If I can do it, ANYBODY can do it, even you. However … you, m’lady, have more important things to do, like … um … getting some writing ready to present? Do what you love and what you do best! ❤
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🥰❤
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Fun way to have them drive off and like the little twist of the shadow
Also – a lot of old ladies used to love that cherry red color
For their lips
Well
Done with details
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Hi! Thanks for your words, yes that color was popular, and the details were fun to add. 🙂
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☀️☀️☀️
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I see Mary Alice has good tastes, since she likes dates. She’s even going out on a date. And she’ll be able to do all the talking, since her date is Horace. Speaking of, her next date will be with a horse. No, that’s tacky.
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“Haha!”
You are “funny!” Thanks, for at least not killing Horace off, or Mary Alice! Maybe they stopped at the grocery store on to get some dates. Thanks for your post, which brought “dates” to my mind. 🙂
Oh and I replied to your email.
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Yeah, they stopped at the store, and they each bought a package of dates. Then Mary became jealous of Horace’s dates, and Horace became jealous of Mary’s dates. They chewed on this issue for a bit, until they realized that dating was the pits. Finally they couldn’t hold it in any longer, and they spit it out and confessed their love for each other.
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OH gosh! I am thinking I should take back my “Thank you!” for the “dates” idea!
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Before you take it back, you’re welcome.
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LOL!
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With Mary Alice’s dates and Horace’s steady supply of prunes, they will have a regular good time together.
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Groaning!
In case you were wondering, you don’t need to elaborate on that topic!
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It will be so much fun for Mary, she’ll record the dates on her calendar. But Horace will be flush with embarrassment.
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…mmm….!!
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At least they are happy. Not sure I will be able to say the same for Sharon whenever you are finished with the reason that she left poor Parker. Was she distracted by some guy with amazing, luxurious, wavy hair?
I replied to your email.
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I am thinking that she hooked up with a circus freak.
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So are we going to hear that story or is it just left to our imaginations? How did Sharon feel when she heard about poor Parker and the way he died?
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He died? I thought he just went to play golf with that guy that runs the coffee shop.
I think Sharon eventually ran-off and joined the circus folk to be with her new-found love, the sword swallower. This naturally led to an unpleasant and tragic ending.
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Yes, that crazy guy that own the coffee shop, run by the nicest waitress.
Umm…yes, I think he is dead, considering that he was lying flat on the ground as you all were trying to hit the golf ball out of his hand!
Oh gosh! What is it with you and Tippy and tragic endings for my characters. Charlie the chicken gets killed tragically and Parker. Leave Betsy and Molly alone! LOL! 😉
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We are just trying to counterbalance the sweetness in your stories.
Like when Sharon tried to surprise her new fella, the circus sword swallower, by giving him a big kiss. Tragic ending for her.
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😶🤚!
Oooh I don’t want to laugh….but! Poor Sharon! Though she kind of deserves that fate after breaking Parker’s heart the way she did.
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Your stories are often like that Shakespeare guy’s plays where everyone ends up dying in the end
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That may be due to the help of some tricky elves!
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My mind went to the Rod Stewart song, Forever Young. https://youtu.be/mwG6g5boyF4
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I was thinking of that song when I wrote it. That one and “Have I told you Lately” are 2 of my favorites of his.
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I also like the Joan Baez version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-4UoJ47SzjA
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I don’t think I had ever heard that version, it was good! Thanks.
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glad you enjoyed it!
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Aww aren’t you kind! ☺
Thanks Jill! You are welcome for having such a fine song stuck in your head! I honestly didn’t even think of that song until the very end of the story, when I added that line. Then I thought how it would make a great title! Yes, I thought of my title last. I do things backwards all time. LOL!
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Nothing like a good mystery to rev up the heart before going out and dancing the night away!
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Totally! 😉
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Sometimes I get in a mood to read kids’ stories and feel carefree, too. But this week I’ve been reading a romance novel of the bodice-ripping variety, in which the heroine got some exercise fencing with the handsome ex-pirate before moving on to exercise of a different kind. Novels for grown-ups can be pretty silly too. But, it’s all fun 🙂
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LOL! Yup! So many books, so little time!
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Don’t get any ideas about Mason from this.
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😂
The way Mason keeps escaping from any girl I try to set him up with I don’t think he has to worry! Does Mason know how to fence?
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Now I have a different Rod Stewart song in my head. “If you want my body and you think I’m sexy…. “
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😂😂 Ob help!
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And now that song is in your head too.
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And how do I “thank” you ?
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More Betsy stories, I suppose.
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LOL!
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I was thinking more along the lines of having Mason singing it when he goes to the coffee shop one morning. 🙂
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They will have a wonderful time, dancing the night away! xoxo
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Yes, they will! Makes me smile to think of these stories again, glad you are enjoying them! 😊
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