Tristan walked slowly to the house as he flipped through the mail in his hand. Bills, bills, junk mail, and …. a letter? Who was writing him a letter? Letters were something rarely heard of these days. He was trying to remember the last time he had received one. There was no return address, so he really had no clue who it might be from.
He walked inside and laid the mail down on the counter, as he walked into the kitchen to get a cold drink from the fridge. Picked up the letter again and walked over to the table and sat down. In his profession one couldn’t be too careful about mail. He was a lawyer, and there were a lot of people sitting behind bars, not feeling too happy with him.
Staring at the letter, he looked at his fish tank across the room and remembered he had to feed them. He loved his saltwater tank, with the clown fish and other brightly colored fish swimming around, darting in and out of the little caves that he had. Dodging around the plants.
Still holding the letter in his one hand, he walked over to the fish tank and shook the food in, watching the fish swim to the top to eat it.
He walked over to his overstuffed chocolate brown couch, sat down, opened the letter and slowly read it.
Mr. McFerral,
“I am sure you are wondering who this letter is from and I will tell you straight up that once you finish this letter you will have even more questions.
I assure you I am not a stalker and I am not trying to blackmail you.
If you think you feel nervous reading this, I feel even more nervous writing it. Many times I started this letter and many times I wadded up the paper and threw it into my wastepaper basket. I lost count as to what number this letter is.
The bottom line is I need your help and that is what gives me the courage to write as butterflies flutter around in my stomach. If you had asked me last year if I would be writing a letter to you I would have said No, but so much can happen in a year. Life is full of the unexpected!
I need to ask you a question and its a question that carries a lot of weight. A question that won’t be asked in this letter. I will be sending my next letter in a few days which will reveal more about me.”
Sincerely,
Jane Doe
Tristan stared at the letter in his hand for a few moments before folding it and slowly putting it back into the envelope. He listened to the gurgling of his fish tank and watched the damselfish swim around. She had a question for him? What kind of question? Who was she? Thoughts swirled in and out of his head, just like the fish darting in and out of the castle that he had recently put in there. What would the next letter say? photo credit Pinterest
I was immediately sucked in! Good writing!
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Thank you very much! Glad you were intrigued!
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Awesome Joy! I really enjoyed this 🙂 I hope to catch the next part… I am a little bit on & off lately, but I’ll try to keep an open eye!! xx
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Thanks Cyranny!! 💕
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You’re welcome 🙂 xx
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😊😊
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I think she’s a deer. A female deer. And she’s worried about the upcoming hunting season. She wants to ask Kristin to be her legal representative, and defend her rights against being hunted down and slaughtered.
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Ummm….gee, I hate to ruin the suspense, but……sorry, you are wrong! Pus its Tristan, not Kristin!
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Then I’ll bet this is Kirsten’s rich great-aunt Jane, who wants to know if it’s okay to leave him in her will.
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…mmm…!! Stop! You are going to make me misspell Tristan’s name next time! 😛
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Oh, sorry. I wouldn’t want you to misspell Christian’s name. It’s vital to the story.
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Its going to be Tonya/Tanya all over again, which was thanks to Jason before!
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That Jason is a real troublemaker. Or is it Jaxon?
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All the stooges are!
Haha!
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That was a stag-gering comment.
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You can get back to work now! 🙂
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Thanks. That’s a good idea.
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Yeah, it kind of bucks the trend.
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You really got to the hart of the matter.
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Gee! Did you already forget my good idea of getting back to work? Short term memory? 🙂
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As comments go, I’d say it’s a 12-pointer.
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No comment! 😝
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Then your comment is a no-pointer.
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I hate keep fawning all over your comment, so I’ll stop here.
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Oooh yeah, you sooo “hate” it. LOL!
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You always find a way to get some talking animal into your stories. A deer this time. I wonder if this deer knows any cows.
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Yeah, you wouldn’t want to fall into a rut.
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You are “hilarious!”
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No, I’m not her. Didn’t she run for prez, four years ago?
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😶🤚
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What will the next question be indeed!!!
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Does make you wonder, doesn’t it! 🙂
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Call me a cynic but (and keeping with the theme) the letter seems a bit fishy. 🐠
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LOL! 😄
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it could be a man, just because it’s signed Jane Doe doesn’t mean anything…
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Oh gosh….well …. you juat don’t know, do you!
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I’ve read a lot of mysteries – I’m always on the lookout for the red herrings… 🙂
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Ahh! You are a sleuth, eh! But you could be wrong! 🙂
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well I know I’m no match for Columbo or Monk… or Scooby Doo for that matter…
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Oh we loved watching Columbo! 🙂
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I hope these aren’t talking red herrings. We already have Jane the letter-writing doe here. There are so many talking animals to keep up with.
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Jane isn’t a doe! There are no talking animals, much to your dismay I know!
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🙉
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😄
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well is there is a doe, a deer, a female deer, then we need Ray, who is a drop of golden sun…
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That would be on Colin’s blog.
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And is he sure the letter is meant for him? He said early on that most of the mail that he got was for some buy named Bill.
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“Haha!”
And yes the letter is meant for him!
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By him, you mean Tristine?
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Nooo….! Its TristAn! You aren’t going to confuse me again.
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Bill is a popular guy…
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He still has some mail delivered to my house as well. I wonder if he knows Trispan?
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😶🤚
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😐🤚🤚🤚🤚
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Haha! Yes, I may have “smacked” more than once today so far!
Still waiting on that helmet!
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who is Trispan?
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The son of Cspan?
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is he one of a set of triplets?
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His brother Deadpan is no longer with us. Betsy Cow, Myrtle Turtle, and Jane Doe were at his funeral.
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the funeral sounds like it was a real barn burner…
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I can no longer hear you stooges! I am comfy in my soundproof hole, just saying!
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Oooh you didn’t! 😶🤚
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Don’t ask! Don’t encourage! Trispan doesn’t exist! 🙂
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I am learning so much today…
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You would gain much more helpful info by reading a book!
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Animal Farm?
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Oooh I sooo didn’t want to laugh at that but I couldn’t help it!
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