In case you missed yesterday’s post here is the link for A Mama for Anna … Part 3
Julia was sitting down by the babbling creek, enjoying the warmth of the sun. Annie was taking a nap and Luke was reading on the couch, but Julia was pretty sure he would soon be taking a nap as well. She had seen his eyes grow heavy as they had been having a nice chat. As the weeks passed, he was opening up to her more and she was becoming more comfortable around him. His eyes were shining brighter and she was enjoying hearing him laugh more.
The cool water splashed up onto her feet, as she dangled them from the log she was sitting on. She hadn’t asked him about the little white cross, but it was still on her mind. What was buried there? Obviously it was special to him, for there was a heart on the cross. What did she really know about this man? He said his wife had just up and left them, but was that really the true story, or was there more?
Julia shook her head as a shiver ran through her. She needed to get hold of herself. Luke had been nothing but a true gentleman to her since she had been there, and she was growing more fond of him over time. Her Mama had always said that she had a wild imagination and right now Julia was letting it run away with her!
There was a tap on her shoulder and she jumped. Had she been that deep in thought that she didn’t notice anyone coming? She turned around and jumped again when she saw Luke standing there holding an ax in his hand!
“Are you okay? You are looking a little pale. Sorry, didn’t mean to startle you” Luke said, with a little smile as he sat down beside her.
“You are fine, I was just lost in thought and didn’t hear you coming.”
“Lost in thought, care to share what you were thinking about?” Luke asked, as he pulled up a dandelion and plucked off its head.
Julia’s cheeks started to flush.
“The color red looks nice on you.” Luke said with a smirk.
Now Julia was definitely blushing! She quickly changed the subject “Where is Annie? Is she still napping?”
“Here I am!” Annie popped out from behind the big Weeping Willow tree, running to Julia with her arms outstretched.
Julia gave her a big hug, as her heart tried to go back to its normal rhythm.
“Well Annie, you stay by Julia now as I cut some dead branches off of the tree, okay!”
“Oh you are going to cut some branches off the tree, of course, that’s why you have the ax, silly me!” Julia said, and then covered her mouth when she realized she had voiced her thoughts out loud.
“That’s the plan, don’t know why else I would have carried the ax down here with me.” Luke looked at her a little quizzically, and then turned to go to the tree. Women could be so perplexing at times, he thought. Then he smiled , recalling her blush. He was going to have to see if he could cause her to blush again, that would be fun. The color red did look good on her, and he chuckled.
Life had a way of throwing you curve balls, and he had been through the dark times when he didn’t think he would make it, but with each passing day he was reminded of how the light can shine again after the dark. He looked towards the happy giggles coming a short distance away. He watched as Julia swung Annie around in her arms, and he caught the glow of the sun shining on Julia’s blonde hair. His heart was warmed, as he turned back towards the tree and hummed a happy tune.
“Julia was sitting down by the babbling creek, enjoying the warmth of the sun. Annie was taking a nap and Luke was reading on the couch, but Julia was pretty sure he would soon be taking a nap as well. She had seen his eyes grow heavy as they had been having a nice chat.”
So I deduce from that introduction that the couch was alongside the babbling creek? Otherwise how would Julia have seen Luke’s eyes grow heavy? 🙂
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Doesn’t every creek have a couch by it? Oh gosh! Thats not what I … yeah I think its probably better that I just leave it at that! ☺️
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Yeh! Probably better. Go and have another glass of wine! 🙂
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Haha! Very funnnny!
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I might need some to take down into my hole with me!
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Yup! Sounds like a plan. A big bottle and a straw should work well for you.
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…mmm…!!
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That was my quandry, too! I hope it doesn’t get ruined when it rains!
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Oooh “thanks” Jill for that concern! It was waterproof, no worries! 😝
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Hmmm. I just presumed that she had observed him before she went to the creek.
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Thank you Barb! 🙂
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🙂
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But … but … just WHO is buried under the white cross? I do like the way you worked the axe incident in there, though. 😉
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Haha!! I bet you do wonder, but in case you didn’t notice this is the Conclusion. 🙂 So guess you will have to wonder! But thanks I thought you would like the axe part. 😄
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That word “Conclusion” was the first thing I noticed, which is why I’m now going to lie awake nights, wondering … pondering … worrying … 😱
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Sorry guilt trip won’t work! LOL!
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Drat! Well, I tried. 🙃
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You get an A for effort. Tippy is trying and failing as well so you aren’t the only one. 😄
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Sent you an email. 🙂
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Got it!
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It’s a chicken, isn’t it?
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More like a turkey wouldn’t you think? Perhaps a rather cross turkey?
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That’s no way to speak of Tippy.
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I thought Tippy was more unicorn inclined. Perhaps the turkey had a single horn? That could make him really cross.
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I thought he was a gnu. Who gnows?
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No gnu that I gnu.
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He doesn’t need encouragement Colin!
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No of course not. He just needs this (hoping YouTube does it’s job right):
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Oh yeah, he sooo needed that!
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Okay everybody. Here’s the answer to the white cross conundrum. It’s Anna that is under it! How do I know? Well the story is about Anna, who disappears after Part 2. The question we should be asking is “Who is Annie?” and “Where did she come from?”
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I had to go back and re-read to see what craziness you were talking about and ….. yeah she did disappear didn’t she! LOL! Oh gosh! But no Anna is not under the cross! You are wrong, so sorry!
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So Anna becomes a unicorn? A turkey? A Gnu? This is one very weird story you have concocted.
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Okay here is the explanation, though I should probably not say it! But you know me, I have to explain things even though 99 percent of the time it doesn’t turn out well for me. But there is always that 1 percent chance that it might! Anna did not disappear! Annie is just a simple nickname for Anna, see how easy that is! Like Jim and Jimmy, Tamara and Tammi, Susannah and Susi. and the list goes on.
Then you have the other explanation that I just wasn’t thinking about my title when I started typing Annie into Part 2 and obviously didn’t think about it in Part 3 or Part 4 either.
I prefer my nickname explanation though!
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Your “nickname” argument is highly flawed, but you not thinking? Yup! Very credible! 🙂
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“Haha!” I see that 1 percent chance slipped through my fingers again!
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Well since you brought up the question, Jason explained his theory. The morning is starting with all your questions being answered, aren’t you lucky!
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Oh gosh!
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Ok, I have had a nice drink and I have a theory. Anna’s mother was named Lizzie, her maiden name may have been Borden. This is where the axe comes in. Now she had this axe which she treasured for mysterious reasons. This is where the chicken comes in. This was no ordinary chicken, few are, this chicken could talk and this chicken knew what Lizzie had done. This chicken was also quite beloved by Luke, but Luke did not know the chicken could talk. So, Lizzie knew that if she hurt the chicken that she would have a tough time explaining this to Luke and she would end up with egg on her face. But Lizzie had a lot of pluck, so she contacted Colonel Sanders to help her In her plot to silence the chicken. So after a nice dinner of fried chicken one night, Luke discovered what had been done and he reached for the axe. The rest of the story writes itself.
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Oh I see I am shaking my head first thing in the morning! You totally confused me at first by Lizzie’s maiden name, then I googled and …. . may have groaned and groaned some more as I read your theory!
A “talking chicken” I should have seen that coming!
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I was going for maximum confusion. Sorry.
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LOL! I think that drink helped you reach it!
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Well did you see Jim’s comment? And did you notice his last name, which yes, added to my confusion! 🙂
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I think I might have a bad case of an overactive imagination as well…granted I’ve always been told I do 😇
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So there’s a heart on the cross? Does this denote the body part buried beneath it?
A couch by the river makes perfect sense to me, so I didn’t notice anything unusual by that detail. Why there are lots of couches by rivers that come floating downstream during flood season, or that just get dropped off there by kind strangers who want to give river travelers a place to rest.
Did you know there are also a lot of banks by rivers?
And this is the conclusion? Sounds to me like you’re still at the beginning. I think you should write a conclusion to your conclusion.
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Oh my gosh, No…That is not what the heart means!
“Haha!” about the couches floating down the river…oooh and yes I know about the banks!
Writing a conclusion to a conclusion?? But who does that? Haven’t heard of that before. 🙂
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I’ve heard of someone who writes beginnings for their endings. So why not a conclusion to a conclusion?
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Beginnings for endings and conclusions to conclusions, gee that person must be crazy!
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It does make me wonder.
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There you go since you like to wonder, you can wonder about that and wonder about what or who is under the cross. 🙂
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Yeah, it’s sort of like wondering what the real conclusion is.
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Oooh….well hey Jason helped to ease your curiosity, he wrote a prequal , though my theory about his prequal is that he came to the Wrong conclusion!
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Writing a prequel to a story that needs a conclusion is a way of chickening out, I think.
I’m gonna have to figure out how to subscribe to your comments, because I’m not aware of all the other crosstalk that goes on in your zany posts, until you point it out.
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Haha! But wasn’t it nice of Jason to take care of the job for me!
In order to be notified of all the crosstalk there is a little box at the end of the post. It says “Notify me of comments’ and you just click on the box and the comments will come to your email. 🙂
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Very nice of Jason. He’s such a gentleman. And a scholar of Lizzie Bordon history.
Thanks for the tech advice. I’ll check it out.
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He deserves a Thank you doesn’t he, you should probably give him one. And yes apparently he is a scholar of Lizzie Bordon history and I am not! Were you a scholar of her history as well?
You are welcome for the advice, At least I could help you in one area. 🙂
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Unfortunately, while Lizzie was being taught in History 101, I cut class. The teacher axed me why I cut class, and I said I just couldn’t handle it. He was mad at me for awhile, but finally we buried the hatchet.
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Oooh I really should know better than to ask some things!
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You chopped it up into a mass of chusetts! He! He! He!
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Oh gosh! You guys are on a scary roll!
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Hey, I can do it now. Thanks for adjusting the setting. And just for that I’m gonna be a nice guy and put my axe and chainsaw away.
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You are toooo nice!
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Yep. Better than a Texas chainsaw.
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Groan!
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And apparently, you don’t allow commenters to comment on the comments made by other commenters, in your comment section. But that’s your business, so I have no comment.
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Oh gosh, Jason confused me already this morning and now you are! Commenters are free to comment on other comments however they want. Perhaps you are the confused one??
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They are? I can’t find a reply button to their comments.
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They should be there. Sometimes though it can be tricky. I have had the same problem at times on your blog.
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Okay, I’ll look harder next time.
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Yer right …. and the couch shouldn’t be next to a river, and Anna should not disappear early into the story, given the title of the story. Also, my comments are not appearing in their correct position.
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And I think I need another straw!
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Jason and Colin were replying to each other with their puns so they found the button. 🙂
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Ah, so that’s it. I have to step up my pun game.
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Ummm….that wasn’t exactly my point!
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Oh don’t worry about it. I have plenty of puns up my sleeve.
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You do know how to ease my mind don’t you! Probably good that you can’t find the reply button for their comments. LOL!
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I think you hid it from me.
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Haha! I am not that tech savvy.
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I can reply to comments that are replies to my comments. But I can’t reply to comments that are not replies to my comments. And some of those comments are begging for punone to reply to them. Er, I mean someone.
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Are you on a computer or your phone? The WP app on my phone I usually have a lot better luck with when making comments.
Yes I am sure you are dying to reply to some of the comments! I know you have replied before to others comments. Are you on my site from the WP reader or going directly to my site?
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I hardly ever blog from a phone. 99.9% of the time, I’m on a desktop computer.
Also, I usually go directly to your site to read posts and make comments. I don’t like the reader much, for that.
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Well you gotta ask someone more tech savvy now! I don’t know what is up. Sorry! Your unicorn is playing tricks on you!
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Tippy – If you can pinpoint a particular comment that does not have a Reply link.. let me know and I ‘ll see what I get. 🙂
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Could be. Unicorns can be playful and mischievous.
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Yup! Did you see Colin’s comment below mine. He said he could try and help you.
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Dang! I’d really like to respond to his comment, but I can’t. There’s no Reply option. But since he challenged me to pinpoint a particular comment that does not have a Reply link, then I pinpoint this one. Come on Colin, try to reply to this comment. Betcha can’t do it.
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You mean like this? On the email that alerted me to your comment, I had the options to Like and/or Reply
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Huh, so you have to do it through email. So that’s the secret. Well I gotta give you credit, you were up to the challenge.
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Thank you. 🙂
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He was up to the challenge because he wants to hear your puns!
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You probably haven’t noticed but PUNS is simply SNUP backwards. I prefer snup to puns don’t you?
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You are right, I never had noticed that before, can’t imagine why! 🙂
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Everyone wants to hear them.
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Snup. 🙂
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Pey.
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ehcuot!
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Egad! An adage!
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Oh I am just feeling so good that I helped you be able to make comments like this!
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Now I won.
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😝
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Did you notice that it’s a palindrome? If I can’t think of a pun, a palindrome can make a good substitute.
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Oh aren’t you clever!
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Well of course.
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I think I feel another coughing attack coming on. Need a glass of water!
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Just deep your glass in that river over there.
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I don’t need a drink anymore but “thanks” ! …mmm….!
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As Reply does NOT show in her Blog per se, it may have reached its limit as established in Settings > Discussion > Other Comment Settings.
Carolyn – Only you can check/fix that!
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I had never set a limit but I will check. I knew there was someone more tech savvy than me.
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It probably defaulted to 10 however, I am only guessing because if WP blocks Replies at 10, why did it allow me to Post direct from an email? Unless of course WP is so primitive that when 10 is reached, it simply removes the Reply option within the Blog? i.e. it does not really block anything!
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Are you talking about where it says, “Enable threaded comments up to ? levels deep..”
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Yes.
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So it should say 10 for that’s as high as its letting me go? It was at 3 before.
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If that’s the limit then … that’s the limit. It may not make any difference but it’s worth a try. Mine is at 10.
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Yeah, Carolyn. Only you can save the day. Now stop staring at the river, get off that couch, and get to work.
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..mmm… it may have taken me about 10 seconds of my mind gong, “what is he talking about I’m not looking at no….” DING! And yeah, I sooo wanted to quickly help you after that! LOL! But because I am sooo nice I did! Well we will see if it helps. I raised the limit to 10.
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Thank you, my heroine. Okay you can go back to sleep on the couch now. But I hope the river doesn’t rise while you’re snoozing.
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“Soo funny!” I am not going to be able to put a river in a story anytime soon am I!
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Sure you can. Just be sure to include more furniture, such as chairs and tables, and maybe a refrigerator.
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…mmm…!!
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I cannot believe you wrote that! You lost Anna somewhere. You had a couch by a river, and I haven’t even studied your story so no doubt there are many more irregularities. There is no doubt in my mind that you are the cause of all the confusion.
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The conclusion that I have drawn is that you need to write an epilogue.
We really need to know what the white cross is for. I will pun you mercilessly until I get an answer.
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Oooh you wouldn’t!
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I think you should introduce a Gnunicorn, or a Unignu, into the story.
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….mmm….! What a “great” suggestion, BUT… hard to introduce something into a story when you already wrote the conclusion!
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Ye of limited imagination – even a conclusion must have a start and a finish … so finish the conclusion and your Followers will be happy! Well that’s my conclusion anyway.
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At least write a prequel. Your audience demands it!
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But you already wrote a prequel! Though I may have a differing opinion to your “theory”!
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you have the best commenters on WordPress 🙂
by the way, the couch by the river makes perfect sense to me – it goes with the chairy tree…
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Ha Ha! SSH …. you may have just made their heads get a little bigger! But you can’t deny that they are entertaining!
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indeed they are!
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i like the little excitement the axe brought to the story, well Luke is holding her interest for sure.
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Yes he is! Glad you liked the axe, gotta thank those imaginative followers that I have for that! 🙂
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it has become a community story, you are a star!
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LOL! It is my readers that make the stories fun, even if they do cause me to …”smack my head”… as well!
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So wonderful. By the way write your stories they way you want to! So in book you could write about this couple…….the wife did run away but was tragically killed in a train wreck……so the little white heart is in memory of her. He did bury there a small box, with her favorite locket. He had given it to her for Christmas one year. And the reason she left? Well it wasn’t sin. She had a disease but didn’t want to tell him, and didn’t want Anna to see her get sick.
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Thanks Nico! It is fun to write the stories and hear where my reader’s imagination takes them! 🙂
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And we love sharing our ideas! Blessings. 🙂
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Keep them coming anytime! The wild thing is that I was contemplating his wife being in a train wreck! My jaw just dropped open when I read that. 😉
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Oh my god I’m so in love with the subtle melancholy and wholesomeness 😍
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Now you are making me blush! 🙂 I do hope you continue to enjoy it! Things start to get a little crazy soon.
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Oh… I want to see you blushing! Quick take a selfie and send it to me! 🤣
Yes, I’m looking at the titles of the next stories with suspicions 😄
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Haha! Won’t happen! You aren’t the first person to ask that, Tippy has asked before too! I am thankful WP doesn’t have a camera! 😛
Haha about your suspicions! This became a series where the characters just took over!
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I guess that’s why I like Tippy, we think a bit alike haha 😆
But that’s what fun about writing. When they rebel against the author.
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LOL!!
You are right! And yes these characters def rebelled!
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How dare they. They need to be taught a lesson. You don’t just go against your creators! 😂
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