Yes, a mid-week Dewey story again. No birthday reason this time, but there is a special reason. You will see it at the end 🙂 ENJOY!
This morning went by fast and now it was almost time. Dewey had taken notice that the man-servant was nowhere around. It was unusual for him to be gone at this time of day. He would usually be dozing in his recliner or working in the garden. He had been trying to find more flower pots with Latin inscriptions on them. He thought that they were valuable relics and may bring money. Dewey knew the truth, but why should he tell the man-servant. It was fun for Dewey to watch him keep digging deep holes.
Dewey wondered if he had left for the races early. Probably trying to get a good seat. That is OK, he could have the best seat, the best seat as he watched his horse lose. Dewey laughed to himself at the thought. Yes, the man-servant and Odessa’s horse would lose, it had to! Dewey had too much at stake for it not to.
Dewey and Jaxon made it to the races in record time. Jaxon was eager for the popcorn that he had been told would be there. He started looking around for it as soon as they arrived.
Odessa waved at them from under a tree where they had a good view. Jaxon almost knocked Dewey down out of his excitement to get to Odessa. She was holding a bag of popcorn for him. Woe to those who come between a Jackalope and his popcorn! Dewey shook his head with laughter.
Dewey directed his gaze to the starting line up. 6 horses were lined up and they all were quite impressive looking indeed! All quite impressive, but #444 was the BEST! That one was Dewey’s pick. A golden brown color and a white star on its forehead. The star was a sign of course that it would be the STAR of the Race!
The race started and the horses were off and running. Excitement was in the air as the friends gazes were intently on the horses that they had picked to win. Each one wanting the bet they made to end up in their favor!
Dewey had been gazing into the crowd of spectators and his eyes landed on none other than the man-servant. He had come early to get a good seat. The friends had met up with each other before the race began. They had wished each other good luck and they were sure to go over the details of the bets made again. Just so that everyone understood and couldn’t try to deny it.
Dewey still found it interesting how Odessa came up to him all happy saying how she was placing her bet on #330. She seemed so confident and Dewey wondered how she came up that horse. She had chosen a horse before Dewey even had a chance to think about who he was choosing. Later that day he found out that the man-servant had also chosen #330. Hmmm..Odessa had chosen the same horse as the man-servant, had he tipped her off?
Dewey realized that there were some things that the man-servant might have more knowledge about. Could horses be one of them? Possibly….but Dewey was convinced that the man-servant and Odessa would be wrong. Dewey would show them, and he raised his tail a little higher. Odessa may be able to fluff out her wings when feeling proud, but Dewey had a tail he could raise as he proudly strutted around.
Around and around the course the horses were going. Sometimes Dewey’s was ahead and then #330 would be. Jaxon hadn’t picked a horse; he was too intent on eating all the dropped popcorn. Dewey’s heart was beating in anticipation of celebrating victory.
He smiled to himself as he thought of the bet that he had made with Odessa. She would bring him 6 mice each day for a whole week if his horse won. Dewey offered to make the same bet with the man-servant when he came over to see them for a little. Strangely the man-servant turned Dewey down, he didn’t want any mice! Jaxon must have been right, the man-servant must be having nightmares about mice and that is why he was so scared of them.
If Dewey won, the man-servant would bring breakfast to Dewey in his bed each morning for a week. He would get 2 pieces of Carp each morning along with his regular breakfast. In the evenings he would get some freshly baked double chocolate cake with peanut butter icing. Oh Dewey could taste it already.
If Odessa and the man-servant’s horse won…well Dewey didn’t like thinking about that possibility. Dewey and Jaxon (Yeah Jaxon got roped into it by Dewey) would have to go on the Magic Wheel again! This time they would be with the man-servant and Odessa! Oh how sly those 2 thought they were. They apparently had great fun on the Magic Wheel and had decided that Dewey and Jaxon could learn to like it. Yeah right, thought Dewey, as he saw his life flash before him again. Dewey really could not lose this bet!!
Everyone was on their feet in the stands, the race was nearing the end. The horses had a little further to go to reach the finish line! Number 330 and Dewey’s horse were neck in neck. Dewey was sure looking forward to mice and breakfast in bed! OH the 2 horses were totally side by side, Dewey could barely breathe and Jaxon was about bursting. He knew what would happen if #330 won, and Jaxon’s stomach was already churning at the thought. Why did Dewey always get him into situations like this? He could not go on that Magic Wheel again. The race was just about over. Dewey glanced at the man-servant and his face was intent, but there was a gleam in his eye. OH #330 could not win; the man-servant would be smirking about it for a long time!
The crowd was yelling and cheering their favorite on. Then just like that, within seconds the race was over. The crowd broke into applause and cheers for the winning horse. Dewey and the man-servant were looking straight into each others eyes, but only one was smiling. Who do you think it was?
Sorry, but when inspiration hits, a a writer has to do what they have to do, right? I honestly didn’t plan on it ending this way, but then I thought why not! Plus I am anxious to know who you think won the bet. No, your answers won’t change the story, it has already been written. The reason I posted this today is because I didn’t think it would be fair for me to make you wait from one Saturday to the next. I know I am not real patient when it comes to waiting. 🙂 Don’t worry, the second part will appear tomorrow. Saturday’s post will be about something different. Dewey may need a break. He may be pale and recovering from another ride on the Magic Wheel, or he may be too full of mice and carp and cake and not able to move. Which do you think it will be? Who won the bet?
I think the horse won!
Question: How did Latin inscribed pots ever get to the US? In my history classes, the Romans never made it across the Atlantic.
And…………. Blogging 101 suggests that breaking a story up into small paragraphs makes it so much easier to read, especially on small devices. You had a reader express difficulty a short while ago for just that reason. You may wish to consider that for future posts. Just thinking! 🙂
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Maybe someone robbed a museum that had the pots on display and buried them till the heat died down. Very far fetched I know but that would probably be the only way to find Latin inscribed pots buried in the US.
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Creative….. but perhaps the inscriptions were not in Latin??? 🙂
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True could have been Greek, couldn’t have been Egyptian no one would confuse hieroglyphics for Latin, maybe it was from the Ancient Mayans or Aztecs oh the possibilities are endless lol
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Ah but given that Latin uses the same symbols as English, then what if it was simply English, but disguised to look like Latin?
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You know right after I hit send I actually thought you know it could have Olde English
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Good thought Becky. Perhaps the author will comment later today. 🙂
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I have it on good authority that they will be on later today
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They????
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Smart thinking Becky about how the pots made it to US soil! 🙂
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OH MY! I wasn’t exactly planning on explaining how Latin inscripted flower pots made it to US soil, but….thanks to your sharp eye for detail, this is what I find myself doing! So here is the story Colin, Remember….you are the one that asked!!
As my readers know ,Jaxon is a very close pal of Dewey’s. Dewey one day was wanting to play a trick on the man-servant and he asked for Jaxon’s help. Jaxon is always eager to help out a friend! Dewey found some old flower pots from all the walks he takes around the neighborhood. He asked jaxon if he could put some writing on them to make them look like they were really OLD and Valuable! Jaxon is a MAGIC Jackalope remember! He closed his eyes and nodded his head 3x and turned around 3x and pointed his paws at the flower pots and suddenly there was a big FLASH! After the flash went away magic words on the flower pots appeared! They looked just like Latin! ANYONE would have been fooled by the inscription. It worked real easily on the man-servant. He keeps digging holes now looking for more in the day, and Jaxon and Dewey keep digging at night burying the flower pots so that they can be found. It is quite the game 🙂
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I like this version! It totally makes sense to me that these guys are just pulling one over on the man-servant 😉
I also appreciate the fact that there are officially enough Dewey stories now to warrant side stories.
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Oh very good. What was the Latin inscription?
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I knew there had to be a reasonable explanation. Jaxon is very clever
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Thank you my friend and yes Jaxon is very clever! 🙂
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Well Colin if you wanted to know what the inscription said, you would have to ask Jaxon. Remember he is the one who put the inscription on the pots. How am I supposed to know, I don’t speak Latin 🙂
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Was just staying gender neutral
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I am not sure that Carolyn would appreciate that …….. but whatever! 🙂
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Ha Ha! It is Becky, she’s my friend, I knew what she meant! Sorry that you didn’t understand. 🙂
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There’s a gleam in the man-servants eye is it from tears or from the thrill of victory? If it is from tears are they tears of sadness or happiness?
So many things to ponder when trying decide who won the bet. It’s obvious that the horse won but whose horse?
Dewey or man-servant
I must pick Dewey
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I want it to be Dewey, but I have a suspicion that it was the man-servant… Can’t wait to find out – glad you aren’t making us wait a week in between! 🙂
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You are a good friend 🙂
And you are welcome for not making you wait! I would like to say that I am not making you wait ALL because of the kindness of my heart. BUT…. it also is due to the fact that it is hard for me to wait to receive things and hard to wait to post things when they are already written. LOL!
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Whatever the reason, I’ll take it! 🙂
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Yes, blogging does tend to make impatience worse! I hope Dewey won — that bet doesn’t seem at all fair to him.
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Well honestly it doesn’t take much to make my impatience worse. LOL! But now I am not impatient when it comes to dealing with traffic jams, lines at the grocery stores,etc. Its more with the receiving of things or looking forward to doing something 🙂
Thanks for the votes for Dewey. 🙂
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Dewey!!!
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Knew I could count on you, for hey you wished the man-servant a 100th birthday! 🙂 Ha Ha!
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😉
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I don’t know JR. I’m not a cat person. I want the manservant to win, I think the cats have no respect for him. But I guess cats are kind of haughty. So I want the man servant to win. I don’t mind Jaxin, but Dewey… hmmm . Either way, great writing!
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Great observations Mandibelle. Cats are very manipulative and are really cute when they want something, but can be quite indifferent otherwise.
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OH Mandi, has the man-servant been talking to you? LOL!
Poor Dewey….. but that is OK, we are all entitled to our opinions 🙂 🙂 Glad you shared and that you liked the story! 🙂
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Haha. I like Jaxon. He has magic powers!
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He is COOL 🙂 I could use a magical jackalope 🙂
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Hi-5 Mandi! 😄😄I’m not too great I’m cats myself 😁
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Hehe I know. Kittens are cute but after that . . .
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Oh you 2 are “funny”! 🙂
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Hmmm…I’m thinking it’s probably Dewey. So, what do we win all your life savings if we’re right? We can all share! We’re flexible that way.
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Hmmm…I’m thinking it’s probably Dewey. So, do we win all your life savings if we’re right? We can all share! We’re flexible that way.
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LOL! Hmmm…You had to post it 2x? You forget you posted it the first time? 🙂 You are FUNNNNNY, no other friend has commented asking for a prize. They are satisfied with the satisfied feeling that comes when you realize that you were right. Apparently you don’t know that satisfying feeling too much, do you? 🙂 I am sorry! Ha Ha!
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Lol that’s just rude!
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What an excellent idea, and very fair. Without us, she would have no Blog; she would not be getting the writing experience; she would not be getting her creative side challenged and therefore developed and, bonus, she gets entertained by the various Comments. She is winning, totally because of us, in so many ways that it is quite reasonable to expect a worthwhile prize…. especially as she was the one who made it into a competition! Chrissieray… I like the way you think! 🙂
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OH gosh!! I would so love to talk more about this “prize” thing, but have to run. Since you are so for this idea as well, you have other reward ideas, besides money??
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Well I obviously cannot speak for Chrissieray (she does that very well without my help), but money would be kind of a guaranteed valid prize wouldn’t it. We can always use a little bit extra, and those of us outside of the US can always convert it to. I do think that your life savings was possibly a little extravagant, but say $1000.00 each would seem reasonable? 🙂
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I know! Idea of a prize is a wonderful idea. Colin can convert his and I can just concert mine to Sudanese pounds 😄
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Ameena – I love you! I would adopt you tomorrow as my daughter, or grand-daughter (depends on your age!) 🙂
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Colin, in case you didn’t notice. I said to think of something besides money! Though I will say that I did offer Christina 51 cents and she had the nerve to turn it down!
Soooo hate to disappoint you all, including you , dear Ameena! But no you won’t have to worry about converting your reward money at all. Well then again I could send Monopoly money 🙂
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Lol didn’t mean to post the same comment twice. Just take notice of my sincerity
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Joy, I love you but this time, My bet Is on the manservant and Odessa!! Two heads are better than one they say.😄
That wa thoughtful of y, not to make us wait one while week to see what Odessa and the manservant would do to Dewey for losing (because of course they are going to win 😂).
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Oh Ameena, 2 heads aren’t always better than one, especially when it comes to ….Well I won’t say 🙂 WE will see how right you are. Try not to fall… would sure be so sorrrrry to see you slip on your pride :p! 😛 🙂
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Go! Go! Go! Man-Servant and Odessa. Well said Ameena! 🙂
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mmmmhmmm!!!
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I like an unexpected ending. As a writer I like to have everything tied up in a neat little package but there’s something to be said for surprise endings. 🙂
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